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DochEvi [55]
3 years ago
14

I'm writing this for English is there anything I should add/change?

English
2 answers:
Levart [38]3 years ago
8 0
Looks good to me however if your getting graded on punctuation you should add a coma to the sentence “while the commoners starve the aristocracy live an extravagant and luxurious lifestyle “ in between “starve” and “the” to make it “while the commoners starve, the aristocracy live an extravagant and luxurious lifestyle” (I hope this makes sense)
Goshia [24]3 years ago
6 0

Answer:

i think it looks good!

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