It looks really good but I think you should put a comma before ( like ) and I suggest to take the ( grave or ) part because it will sound a lot more better
About WHY schools should educate students how to manage money and how to do taxes???
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I think schools SHOULD teach students how to do their taxes because it's an aspect of adulthood they are almost otherwise unprepared for completely. Most school's curriculum is based on 4 core classes and various electives, but life is more than those 4 classes. Taxes, money managements, and management of other areas of life would be tremendously useful and I think there would be an immeasurable difference made in the lives of the students. They would be more prepared for financial obstacles they may face, and they'd more than likely be more successful in their transition in adolescence.
This excerpt is from 'The Hamlet'.
Explanation:
Ophelia says that Hamlet has made sincere proclamations of his love for her. Polonius answers, Tender yourself more dearly. Polonius means Ophelia should be more careful and judge to whom she has to give her affection.
Shakespeare uses humor in this scene but the humor is subtle as it describes the conflict between Ophelia and her father.
The tone creates despair and disgust among the readers. The story is about her love for Hamlet and loyalty to her father.
Polonius depicts Hamlet as unreliable and to have intentions that are not noble.
Answer:
i like soccer (change the word them to he or she if they r a girl or boy)
Explanation:
My friend can do it by going to the soccer feild together and playing a game. For example, l can give them a list of things to do and we can start practicing. If l wanted to show them how to shoot a goal, I can teach them by showing each of the steps to get good at it. Also, I can show them each position in the field and help them by saying what the certain jobs the postition does.
