I believe that you should just check your spelling , capitalize some I's and the word January .
You should also give more detail about the Sunday event.
When you say the word conclusion I begin to think about a short paragraph / summary , this means you should bring the reader in , draw my attention to your mint idea.
I really hope that I'm helping you , :)
Answer:
My eyes couldn’t focus, my contacts dried out. It wasn’t his turn, but I asked Jackson to take over driving so that I could rest.
Explanation:
If you want to combine the two sentences use a ; but if you need to split the sentences into to use periods.
Answer:
The streets are unusually crowded.
Explanation:
From the text we understand that the traffic is unusually heavy and that there had never been so many people driving in the quiet neighbourhood.
The answer is the franks told the maid they were going to Switzerland
The definition of reinforcements is being backed up with examples, facts and statistics to prove your point.
According to English..
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