B) It uses present tense when it should use past tense.
Answer:
This is an example of Paraphrasing plagiarism
Explanation:
This two versions are quite similar, the student's version takes sentences from the original version and place them in the same way, and even when there are some small pieces of information omitted or little changes in punctuation, it does not present the correct use of paraphrasing, there are reference but the lines are not written between quotation marks.
Correct sentence: The weather guy said that it was supposed to rain, but I don't see a drop coming from the sky yet!
A comma is needed to separate the independent clause after rain. - True.
A comma is needed to correctly punctuate the compound sentence- True
Answer:
This seems to be cut off, but I have corrected the parts that are present.
Today Isaac and Evelyn RETURN from their trip to their grandparents, and their parents are looking forward to seeing them.
4. The author describes the history of the Civil Rights Movement and then shows Parks' place in it.
