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How to revise:
Put your draft aside. Time away from your essay will allow for more objective self-evaluation.
Get feedback. ...
Construct a backward-outline of your essay. ...
Rethink your thesis. ...
Now that you know what you're really arguing, work on the introduction and conclusion. ...
Proofread.
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•Try to use English everyday
•Not all plural that ends with y needs to cancel "y" and change it into "ies"
Example: Toy(singular) -> Toys(plural)
•Buy a Dictionary/Thesaurus to improve your vocabulary
•Read English books
Buy a teacher and learn from her c c c c c c c c c
