Answer:
Besides the last paragraph which needs to be reworkered your essay looks great.
Explanation:
easy.
Besides and Your
Beside the last paragraph, which needs more work, your essay looks great.
Explanation
"Beside" needs to be "besides" . "You're" needs to be changed into "your".
I know this is a freebie but other students may have the same question.
In the end, she went to therapy and lived happily ever after yayyy
sorry
i am
