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Social media is addicting because you can crave validation from others with likes and comments. It could also be addicting because you feel you are not good enough like these other men and women so you look at their body and compare it to yours. You should not be on social media that often if you do not have very high confidence and self love and can be brought down easily by words and pictures. Social media creates more problems sometimes and sometimes its a good platform but being on it to much can fill your brain with toxic thoughts that are no good for you.
Satan,[a] also known as the Devil,[b] is an entity in the Abrahamic religions that seduces humans into sin or falsehood. In Christianity and Islam, he is usually seen as either a fallen angel or a jinn, who used to possess great piety and beauty, but rebelled against God, who nevertheless allows him temporary power over the fallen world and a host of demons. In Judaism, Satan is typically regarded as a metaphor for the yetzer hara, or "evil inclination", or as an agent subservient to God.
1) The wrong sentence is D. In that case you don't need the possessive pronoum YOUR because what you need is a personal pronoun. YOU'RE is the correct form. However, as it is a question, the most suitable position for the pronoun is after the verb to be.
2) The incorrect sentence is C. In that case you need the pronoun THERE because the verb comes before its subject.
3) The incorrect sentence is D. In that sentence a personal pronoun +verb to be is needed. As it is talking about the weather the correct way is IT'S. The possessive adjective or possessive pronoun (its) is not correct for that context.
4) The wrong pronoun is in sentence B. When the sentence starts with the preposition TO you need the pronoun WHOM. The preposition can also be at the end of the sentence.
