This is weak evidence, because he can not use one example an athlete compared to others. Jesse needs to give more examples of other athletes as well, instead of just LeBron James.
Answer:
<u>Noun</u> "Jack"
<u>Verb </u>"solved"
<u>Article</u> "the"
<u>Adjective</u> "important"
<u>Direct Object</u> "crime"
<u>Prepositional Phrase</u> "after the clues were given"
<u>Prepositional Phrase</u> "to him"
<span>a federal program sponsored by the U.S Armed Forces in high schools and also in some middle schools across the U.S and U.S military bases across the world.
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How could a change in emphasis BEST develop the events in this passage, making for a more interesting and exciting read?
A) The author could spend even more time discussing the preparations for takeoff.
B) The author could shorten details about McKee's preparations and give more details about the rocket flight and the adventures that took place during colonization of Saturn.
C) The author could list and explain the different dials and switches in the cockpit to show how the advanced technology of the shuttle works, with plenty of intricate technical detail.
D) The author could focus the story solely on McKee's careful preparation for the trip, noting what he had for lunch and the clothes he wore.
