The best answer that I can see is the first one: divide long sentences into shorter ones. There were several sentences that were run-ons, and dividing them up would help.
On a side note, this passage is VERY poorly written. there are issues with commas and dangling modifiers throughout that can't be fixed with any of the options provided.
Answer:
D
E
True
Explanation:
I’m not gonna be truly positive that I’m right but just use my answer
Showing instances of violence.
Hope this helps, have a good day!! :)
