Amazing Story! My only critque, would to have someone else you know check it, or read it aloud. If you do that you can see fi the story makes sense or not. Other than that AMAZING! ::)))
i also use wattpad and i kind of had writers block but your a talented writer as i read your story and loved it most readers love long chapters so keep that in mind
Answer: Naruto Uzumaki Explain: he’s just such a hard working kid and he never gives up even if he’s at the verge of dying...it really amazes me how he never loses hope.
