Answer:
Simple.
Explanation:
It just seems like a normal statement. ;w;
I looked it up online and found the question related to this personal statement. It is the following:
Why does the writer need to revise the personal statement?
A. sentence 1 should include the writer’s first name.
B. sentence 2 should state what the essay prompt was.
C. sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money.
D. sentence 4 should avoid the extreme opinion.
Answer:
The reason why the writer needs to revise the personal statement is:
C. sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money.
Explanation:
<u>A personal statement is supposed to be a brief description of oneself in connection to the career one wishes to pursue. It should mention one's experience, education, and strengths in relation to that field. However, mentioning money should be avoided.</u> The personal statement is not the "place" to do so. Instead of sounding ambitious in a good way, talking about "good money" - as the writer did in the passage we are analyzing here - may make one sound shallow.
Keep in mind an adverb gives more information or describes further information on the verb, adjective, or other adverb.
The theme reveals that he likes to compete against others. therefore, the 3rd option is correct.
<h3>What is the theme of the story Bellerophon and Pegasus?</h3>
The Theme of this tale is to never confront a higher power without solid justification. The Lycian ruler sends Bellerophon on an impossible quest to slay the monster Chimaera rather than killing him.The Lycian king has never heard from anyone, therefore he has no expectations.
Bellerophon likes to compete with others as seen by his expectation that he will take pleasure in a feast and court games in Lycia, which supports the idea that excessive pride adds to one's demise.
Learn more about Bellerophon here:
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