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Your title depends on what your text and reasons are specifically about and what the information you are given is, however I would choose whichever one fits your information the best. However, they all are talking about bicycles. I would most likely choose the health benefits of bicycling.
Answer:
The phrase that makes this thesis statement wordy is: electronic mail.
Explanation:
Wordiness refers to making something longer than it should be, that is, using too many words to express something. In the case of the thesis statement we are analyzing here, all words seem to be necessary with the exception of the final phrase. As we know, "electronic mail" is no longer an expression in use. It's been decades since it has been replaced by the shorter version "email", "e" standing for "electronic". Not only does using "electronic mail" make the sentence wordy, it also makes it sound old-fashioned.
Jeremy spent all weekend cramming<span> for a </span>test<span> on </span>time management<span>. When </span>he got<span> to</span>school<span>, </span>he realized<span> the </span>test wasn't until<span> the </span>following week<span>.</span>
