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HACTEHA [7]
3 years ago
13

I need someone to 'grade' my essay WILL GIVE BRAINLYST IF GIVEN BEFORE TOMORROW pdf linked

English
2 answers:
insens350 [35]3 years ago
7 0

Hope this isn't too late but here are some suggestions:

<em>Essay quote ~ </em><em>Suggested improvement</em>

<em>"Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Happiness has been violated through different </em><em>literatures</em><em> "</em>

"Pieces of literature, forms of literature".

<em>"One out of three shots fired</em><em>,</em><em>  went through Malala's left eye socket"</em>

Unnecessary comma.

<em>"Malala's life was put in danger when an individual disagreed with her beliefs</em><em>, </em><em>and used  violence as an option."</em>

Unnecessary comma - Do not place comma before 'and'.

<em>"For example</em><em>s</em><em> the Japanese Americans were forced </em><em>to go to </em><em>camp during war in 1942."</em>

<em>"</em>For instance, the Japanese Americans were forced into camps during the war in 1942."

<em>"Those asked to go</em><em>,</em><em> had no choice but to go to the camps."</em>

Unnecessary comma.

<em>"Within literature and history Liberty is  violated."</em>

Add comma - "Within literature and history, Liberty is  violated."

Those are all my suggestions, gl










Nezavi [6.7K]3 years ago
4 0
I like it it's pretty good
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