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Sergio [31]
3 years ago
11

Proofreading this assignment as I'm not very good at English.

English
1 answer:
Mariulka [41]3 years ago
4 0

Answer:

First line you need a comma after Mrs Gonzalez. First line capital letter to start ‘We’

First paragraph ‘new dimension of client service, office space and studios***.’ ‘Clients looking for new office facilities***.’ You need a comma after filing cabinets and lastly in the first paragraph you need to change ‘they is’ to ‘they are’. And a full stop at the end of that paragraph

Second paragraph. Needs to start with a capital letter ‘This’. ‘At no charge to you**comma**....’ ‘any offices you offer**comma**...AS this will be AN important sales aid that will pay off and help with increased sales efficiently.’ ‘Estate firms like yours ARE always looking for new...’

Last paragraph. ‘Happy to MEET’ ‘together’ is one word. ‘Have a client with office FURNISHING (change need to needed) and end with a full stop and then begin new sentence. We will prove that this service will work for you.

Explanation:

Glad to help if you need me to explain everything let me know. I’ve put spelling mistakes etc in capitals so it’s easy for you to see!

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