Write for your reader, not yourself.
Use pronouns when you can.
State your major point(s) first before going into details.
That woman that looks at herself in the mirror for long minutes is very vain. Vain means excessively proud of one's appearence so when someone spends too much time in a mirror, they are considered vain. I have seen this in my daily life because so many women and men spend too much time in front of a mirror just looking at themeselves not even fixing up.
Answer:
What makes our heart moving? What else could it be except arts including literature? In a technology-driven world today, it is often thought that scientific subjects will be more important than arts subjects, but what makes us different from robots and machines? It is that we have feeling and emotion, and literature nurtures these mental values for us. The ultimate goal of education is not only offering us academic knowledge but also teaching us about mental responsibilities such as respect for older generation, so that students can become well-rounded citizens. If world literature is cut from school curriculum, it will be a great loss because good mental values from all around the globe will not be passed through young generation anymore.
Answer:
He actually cares for his daughter
Answer:
The pronoun <em>we</em> should be changed to <em>they.</em>
Explanation:
the story was written in first person pov. in order to change it to third person, it is necessary to change the pronouns <em>we</em> into <em>they. </em>
