Explanation:
I felt fear when I was six, I was afraid I was going to loose my only sister who was about to die of cancer, I was afraid I was going to loose the one who makes me smile always, At my age I felt very lonely without her knowing that she was going to die I cried so hard,I didn't want to leave her in the hospital alone so I hid anther the hospital bed.
Answer:
i dont know ahbout that one cheif
Explanation:
<span>the answer is: The reader learns both that the narrator has an older brother, and his brother and John are older.
Appositive phrase is a noun or noun phrase that renames another noun right beside it. We can see that the writer directly shares the information about his brother by including the information</span><span />
A pular is more than one in number. and a singular is <span>exceptionally good or great; remarkable.</span>
Constructive feedback reinforces positive behavior and offers a critique in a direct but respectful way. If given in a negative or rude way, criticism might not only hurt the feelings of the receiver but also reinforce negative behavior. Blending praise and suggestions make the feedback polite and efficient.
In the excerpt, the two parts that contain constructive feedback are:
<em>'My favorite part of the essay was when you described your grandmother's reaction after finding the frog in her purse because it was so funny and so vivid.'</em>
<em>'I would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same words many times in the essay. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms if you need to.'</em>
The first section reinforces positive behavior by offering a compliment while the second one offers a suggestion for improvement.
The other sections criticize his friend's paper in a negative way, making harsh comments without offering any suggestions or solutions to the flaws found.
