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Trends, which were already in motion, accelerated, and that acceleration has brought us at least several months, if not years, forward. We have observed new users coming online even in the most penetrated markets; we have seen digital natives experimenting with shopping in new categories. For instance, at eBay alone, we have noted six hundred percent growth on VR headsets.
I believe it’s a kind of a ratchet – once people have crossed that threshold of being comfortable buying everything from grocery to dumbbells online or in the app, they won’t go back. This is a behavioural change.
Okay. So. First of all, rlly nice story =D I'm glad you got what you wanted. Now, to the point.. at first, I started to list every point where i thought you can change, but to be honest, and i mean no offense when i say this, but i think itll take me a very long time and a printed out version to mark it up so i think ill jjust give u a couple of tips. I hope they help.
- you dont exactly have any main idea going... only after reading the entire thing did i understand what "the battle" was and why you were anxious to get the results. you should clarify in the beginning what it is youre talking abt. a sentence like " Sixth grade had just started, and already I had begun to lose focus. My brain seemed to constantly drift towards other, more important things; like the upcoming custody battle between my parents over my brother and I."
-dont use the same word over and over again. try not to use it more than twice in one paragraph, it becomes repetitive, and a little annoying to read. An example: '<span>That battle was cemented in my head, all I could do was think about that battle.', I would change the second "battle" to "it"... you can do the same to other sentences, just look up synonyms and replce them, itll mean the same thing.
- Also, words like "socializing" might be too strong a word to use.... you can put 'talking' lol... its important to remember that you dont always have to use big words, and especially when youre writing a personal narrative, you should stick to ones you use on a day to day basis... save the big ones for formal essays :)
- the tenses seem to change throughout the story.... you start out correctly. in the past tense, and then u use a verb in the future tense, such as "will happen"
- don't add details you dont need or dont support the main idea... like the part about forgetting your brother. its just a side detail. or u can change how u introduce that detail. instead of the two or three sentences about forgetting him, u can just write " I was so anxious and excited to find out what the results were that i forgot to pick up my younger brother on my way back home from school, and ended up having to go all the way back to get him, prolonging the suspense."
If you want more specific details on where to change exactly what, i suggest you go to someone in person, they might be able to help you more. Best of luck! </span>
Kind of because, ambition is a strong push towards to what you want to do, but destiny can either let this happen, or change it completely.(hope I.helped)
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"My, wasn't life's awful...and wonderful"
Explanation:
In the context of grammar, juxtaposition is a process of combining phrases and establishing syntactic relations between them. It is an operation similar to coordination and subordination.
The juxtaposition uses punctuation marks (in the written language) or pauses to link two sentences. Because it does not use links (such as "and", "from" or "to"), this process can give rise to different syntactic interpretations depending on the speaker's context or capabilities. The juxtaposition also allows one to join two simple sentences.
With this we can conclude that an example, where the juxtaposition is presented is the phrase "My, wasn't life's awful...and wonderful"
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Situational Irony, this story wouldn't have been funny if Sam wasn't in the position he was in.
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