Question

How do I rewrite this sentence: There is a long hallway. Ben walks down it. He sees a series of doors. None of the doors has a sign on it. He doesn't know which door to choose. He tries the first one. It just leads to an empty room. He hears a noise. He looks over his shoulder. Nobody is there.

Answer 1

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Explanation:

The sentence can be rewritten in two ways;

1. The foyer is very long. Ben strolls down it. He saw a series of doors. There are no signs on the doors. He didn't know which door to choose. He tried the first one. It just leads to an empty room. He heard a sound. He looked over his shoulder. No one is there.

2. There is a long corridor and Ben went on. He sees a progression of entryways with no signs on them. He does not know which entryway to pick, he attempts the first and it simply prompts a vacant room. He hears a sound and looks over his shoulder. No one is there.