The best answer for this question would be:
<span>The paragraph is choppy and in need of transitions.
It lacks the transitions needed in the passage. It doesn't flow right, and the topic jumps from one another making it a confusing passage to read. </span>
Write a introduction. Then add three paragraphs about what you did. Then add a conclusion closing the essay. That’s all you have to add
*First person* is the point of view that makes the reader feel like a close friend or confidant.
The most correct answer would be D. <span>Inhabitants of Mars looked toward Earth for various reasons, some rather obvious.
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The last sentence is textual evidence of this.
<span>because it takes self-discipline and responsibility. Both of them are basically not good.</span><span />
