I took a survey and I concluded young people can encorage more people their age than being older. For example Anne Frank, who died at the age of 15 ,but wrote the most popular book of the century that turned out being her diary! Read the book "Who Was Anne Frank?" or her biography to find out more.
i dont think so but maybe use a semi colon after the word desks to show how the two clauses are connected and make it sound less like a run-on sentence
The authors purpose about this article is to inform people that not everybody can afford to live in a home. Thats why there sometimes be a protest about homeless people or there be other people helping the homeless cause they have nowhere to go. The reason why I say this is because helping people that needs help the most is not only nice but also it’s because you care about them.