Standard news stories are organized with the most important facts first. This is done so that people who only read the first couple of paragraphs get the gist of the story.
Also -- people tend to remember what they heard or read first -- when they are more alert and interested.
Jamie Moore being unkind should be left out. That’s direct characterization, which isn’t necessary in a summary of a plot. It’s descriptive rather than a detail that moves the plot along.
The stargazers are lying on the ground on their backs who are tired from looking through the eyepiece of the telescope. One gazer stands up and takes a peek again at the eyepiece which is small and black. He sees something and calls out to his friends. "I found it," he said. They look at each other without saying anything.
