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1. Inappropriate shift: It should be I can hear the waves vs you can hear.
2. Inappropriate shift: It should be either dried the clothes in the sun or dried them. It is plural and not singular use.
3. Inappropriate shift: It should be they had to take the long road... Again it is referencing plural and not singular
4. Inappropriate shift: It should be and gave them water to drink.
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Answer:
Explanation:
A letter to brother describing the state of her health condition of sick grandmother:
154, Ravish Street
Pune- 400015
Dear Brother
Hope you are in the best of health? Just wanted to brief you about the detracting health condition of granny. Recently I happened to visit her at the hospital and from what I saw there is nothing encouraging to talk about.
A few of her major organs have stopped functioning and as per the doctors she is to be kept under observation for the later years of life. Miracles have happened and there is a sense of optimism as well.
My suggestion to you is that If you can take a couple of days off from your work schedule, and catch up with her it would be great.
Your loving brother
ABC
Break it up before something bad happens
