Question

What is the BEST way to revise this sentence so that it conveys clear, concise ideas and does not change the meaning? Mona told me that I had won an award for my poem that to pick it up on Saturday.
A) Mona told me that I had won a very prestigious award for my poem.
B) My award will be ready to be picked up on Saturday. Mona told me this.
C) I won an award for my poem. Mona said I should pick it up on Saturday.
D) Mona told me that I had won an award for my poem and that I should pick it up on Saturday.

Answer 1

The answer to this is D

Answer 2

The answer is D hope this helps!