Senator McKee, I am writing to humbly request your presence at our Harper Middle School Honors Brunch, the annual event where we
celebrate our students and, of course, eat some rockin' breakfast sandwiches. I know you're crazy busy, but if you find an hour to spare this Saturday, we'd all be super excited. Which revision best maintains an academic style throughout?
Senator McKee, I am writing to humbly request your presence at our Harper Middle School Honors Brunch, the annual event where we celebrate our students and eat some delicious food. I know how busy you are, but if you could find the time to attend, everyone would be grateful.
It's C. Senator McKee, I am writing to humbly request your presence at our Harper Middle School Honors Brunch, the annual event where we celebrate our students and eat some delicious food. I know how busy you are, but if you could find the time to attend, everyone would be grateful.
The first quotation has the characteristics of Realism which are objective writing, non-poetic diction and trustworthy events that are realistically described with a lot of details. In this excerpt, we can see a detailed description of the man who had been killed.
The second quotation has Idealism characteristics and the main characteristic of it is the spirit and after that logic and nature described in a poetic way.
