How should I make this sentence make more sense? I don’t know if I should fix the semicolon or if I should make it 2 separate se
ntences... “By seeing all her actions and the way she thinks, I would say she is at stage 3; because although she doesn’t want to do all these things, she still wants approval from her parents.”
By seeing all her actions and the way she thinks, I would say she is at stage 3 because, although she doesn’t want to do all these things, she still wants approval from her parents.
Explanation:
I took off the ; and added a coma after "because" so that "although she doesn't want to do all these things" is like it's in ().
Many Americans opposed the war on moral grounds, appalled by the devastation and violence of the war. Others claimed the conflict was a war against Vietnamese independence, or an intervention in a foreign civil war; others opposed it because they felt it lacked clear objectives and appeared to be unwinnable
