How should I make this sentence make more sense? I don’t know if I should fix the semicolon or if I should make it 2 separate se
ntences... “By seeing all her actions and the way she thinks, I would say she is at stage 3; because although she doesn’t want to do all these things, she still wants approval from her parents.”
By seeing all her actions and the way she thinks, I would say she is at stage 3 because, although she doesn’t want to do all these things, she still wants approval from her parents.
Explanation:
I took off the ; and added a coma after "because" so that "although she doesn't want to do all these things" is like it's in ().
