Question

I need tips for my creative writing assignment. A girl with the power to bring fictional and real characters to her is walking down the street. She comes across some villains while walking down the street going home from school. She can only use her power to a certain length before she blacks out. She brings three of her friends to help her. The four are beaten by the villains, and the girl is kidnapped by them. The girl is held in a rundown building for a few hours until they become bored with her and release her. After being shaken up like that her friends (the people in the pictures) became very protective of her. A few weeks pass by and she readjusted to her normal life as if it had never even happened.

Answer 1

This made my brain hurt to be honest. But if that was your goal for the readers than your doing really good.

Answer 2

Answer:

I wouldn't say she reajusted to her normal life as if it never happened... change it to how that had completely changed her as a person after the unfortunate incident and how she will never be able to use her powers again or something like that I DONT KNOW