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I love going to the zoo with my dad. Many of the animals are cool and we like looking at animals especially lions. <u>because</u> (lions are big and strong and strong animals are scary) (Change : They are tough and ferocious, which makes them scary)<u> </u><u>in real life</u> but when they are in a cage it isn't so bad. <u>but</u> I would never want to be put in a cage because I would get sad. <u>so</u> (I don't know if the animals are happy or sad but) (change : Uncertain if the animals will feel happy or sad themselves) my dad (says)(change : said) that the animals at the zoo are very well taken care of and i shouldn't worry about them.
Explanation:
I added brackets to the parts where i changed the sentenced, underlined the parts I would cross out and bold the periods.
Where it says change : don't add that in the sentence.
Answer:
a ballooon filled with helium if sealed properly
Explanation:
balloons filled with helium will get stuck in the atmosphere
Answer:
Maryam Khan wrote this passage "Should You Work During the School Year?" to encourage students to work not because their parents worked, but because of the unique life-long experience that the students can gain while working and studying.
Students who work reflectively appreciate their classroom lessons. They understand that their lessons can be practicalized, and in the process, discover the world of work. They intend to be get themselves better prepared for life than those who do not work.
Explanation:
Working during the school year is a way of earning some income to help betray the studentship expenses. To lessen the near-total reliance on parents and students loans, working appears to be the best, and saves one from wasting valuable time, partying as many students do.
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Answer:
I assume that the blank -- which you did not provide -- occupies the 'verb' position in the sentence. If so, then here are some examples I have brainstormed .....
scampered
scurried
darted
sprinted
raced
bustled
skipped
trotted
scuttered
scooted
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