Answer:
Explanation:
First of all, I think it would do justice to me giving a very short explanation on what a Metaphor is.
A metaphor is a figure of speech that uses a word, often times a phrase, to refer or talk about a word. It states a direct similarity between a word or phrase being used, and the word or phrase being described without using the words "as" or "like."
That being said, I will pick out two of the metaphors in the poem.
1) "my stomach was a melon split wide inside my skin."
2) "I felt the life sliding out of me."
An example sentence could be:
"The climate is changing rapidly for the worse, which is why we should care more for the environment."
Answer:
the answer should be the first one that you listed (After contemplation, I conclude that this award which I receive on
behalf of that movement is a profound recognition that nonviolence is the answer to the crucial political and moral
question of our time the need for man to overcome oppression
and violence without resorting to violence and oppression.)
Explanation:
1. Always deliver what you promise.
2. Each pronoun should agree with their antecedent.
3. Between you and I, case is important.
4. Verbs have to agree with their subjects.
5. Don't be a person whom people realize confuses "who" and "whom."
6. Never use no double negatives.
7. A writer should not shift their point of view.
8. When writing, participle must not be dangled. Don't do it even if it's hard not to.
9. Join clauses good, like a conjunction should.
10. Don't write run-on sentences, you need to punctuate them properly.
11. About sentence fragments. Don't. Unless it's for effect.
12. In letter themes and reports use commas to separate items in a series as well as phrases and clauses when required.
13. Don't, use commas, that aren't necessary.
14. Its important to use apostriphe's in the right place's.
15. Don't abbrev. unless approved by the Associated Press Stylebook.
16. Check to see you any words out.
17. Try to never split infinitives.
18. Avoid using a preposition to end a sentence with. That's a practice up with which some readers will not put.
19. Parallel structure will help you in writing more effective sentences to express yourself more gracefully and its pleasing to your editor.
20. In my own personal opinion I think that an author when he is writing should not get into the habit of making use of too many unnecessary words that he does not really need to use.
21. Last but not least, lay off the cliches and mixed metaphors. They might kindle a flood if anger in your editor.
Yes, that's twenty one, but they all needed to be listed to properly answer this question. The errors in the sentences are all purposeful and intended.
I do hope this helped you. :)