Answer: In general, use sentences of different lengths. Also consider moving adverbs or adverb clauses from the end of a sentence to the beginning.
For transitions, think about the relationship between ideas. Is it a time sequence? Use words like first, then, after that, finally. If it's logic, use words like because, since this... then that. Or therefore, as a result.
Explanation:
The thing that can be done to change Ally's drawing of a dark room is for her teacher to be more interactive with her.
<h3>Who is Ally?</h3>
She is a character in the book <em>Fish in a Tree</em> who prefers to make a drawing of a dark room in her journal.
According to the complete text, there is the narration of the classwork where Ally and her classmates are given a class work by their teacher, Mr. Daniels to write anything on a book.
Ally draws a dark room and says she wants to be invisible and her teacher gives her feedback and tells her that he is glad she is visible which makes Ally happy and such encouragement and interaction can help Ally out of her 'dark room'
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Robinson Crusoe said he lived in fear for two years after seeing the footprint in the sand.
Personification is when you give human like traits to non living items. (if you still cant figure it out, let me know and Ill help you out)
