Question

Like Will Smith stated “your heart, your life, your happiness is your responsibility.

Answer 1

Explanation:

try not to repeat "My responsibilities".

In your last paragraph, try doing this...

" In terms on my education, my studies remain my first responsibility, to get educated, to earn a diploma and to become a successful person in the future, however in order for me to be a responsible person I need to focus on taking care of myself... ......"

something like that...

but other wise it is okay...