I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.
A) Aluce is trapped in a strange place and wants to get out
Iambic Pentameter. It's written in Iambs (sets of one strong followed by one weak syllable), and there are five of these per line (hence pentameter). It's most commonly associated with Shakespeare.
