No, I love it! I think it is perfect!
Lines 5-6: what is the distant look in your eyes?
Lines 13-14: what could have created such a scary creature and how?
Lines 23-24: allusion to God, how could God create something that is both beautiful and also terrifying and fearful?
Answer:
Have you make a speech in public before? It isn't easy!
Answer:
The third option. My father, a huge baseball fan, taught me to throw when I was three,
Explanation:
It is correct because it renames the noun (my father) next to it.
