Example of a sentence that most needs to be revised because it's description is too vague is : we hike two miles uphill in the blooming forest.
Usually, you hike on the mountain not in the blooming forest.
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That's going to be a horrible sight. Haha, I can't see, right. Even if it's not in a storm, it's still horrible. I've tried walking while closing my eyes, and to be honest, I dread it. I think the longest I've done is gone 30 seconds, I had to open my eye. Even at that, it was on a flat land, and I had to walk slowly despite the fact that I knew there was nothing in my front, and it was an even landspace.
Now, all that being said, on a fairly good situation, I wasn't able to close my eyes for long. I simply can't imagine myself being left alone in the middle of a storm. That will be very very traumatic for me. It's draining me mentally imagining how helpless I will be, so it's a no for me.
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whos brain
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and why does he need a shelter
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It seems like you missed the actual text part of the question
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I think it’s c I may be wrong tho. I wish you luck!!
