Is this a good poem if not what can i improve?
       
      
                
     
    
    
    
    
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Its good!! I really enjoyed reading this thank you
                                
             
                    
              
              
                
                
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It is a good Poem...
Explanation:
Improve the rhyme scheme, if you want to, because it is free-flow at the moment. Throw in a few idioms to make the imagery more vivid.
 
                                
             
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