the answer is "Shlemiel's treatment of the dog shows that Shlemiel is a kind, tender person.'
Revising
prewriting is just getting basic ideas down/planning
drafting is turning those ideas into sentences and paragraphs making your rough draft
editing is major changes such as rearranging, adding, or deleting sentences
revising is small changes such as grammar or spelling
The diver strapped the aqualung to his back in preparation to dive
Cross of the fabric of edge if the fabric that parallizes
State attainable through study and practice
