If Cameron's claim is all kids should receive and allowance from their parents, which of the following would be a good countercl
aim? A.When kids don't receive allowance, it helps them to be self-motivated to find other ways to make money.
B.kids can be taught to save, spend, donate, and invest with their allowance.
C.Through a regular chore routine, kids will grow to understand that they have to be responsible and that they have obligations that are counted upon by others.
I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.