Answer:
To be able to show instead of tell, you have to create images in the reader's mind.
Explanation:
1. "Thousands of tiny bits of snow rained down silently all night."
See, you have to say what the snow was like. You have to use at least some of the 5 senses: sight, hear, smell, taste, feel. This is how you show.
2. "We got up at the crack of dawn and piled into the car. We had already packed our bags yesterday. The cool air breezed us as we stepped out and ran on the dry sand. We swam through the ice cold water and ate crunchy sandwiches."
This is how you show. You put enough detail so that the reader knows exactly what's going on and makes the reader feel like they are in the story.
3. "All week at summer camp, my throat was sore from roaring with laughter all the time. I loved zipping through the air on ziplines with my friends, splashing them in the water in the pool, and playing hard-core basketball on the hot court."
You have to go into specifics to show. It's like looking through your own memories. You probably remember a lot from your life, all the tiny details. You have to make fake memories for story telling.
4. "Tim repeatedly chewed on his fingernails, glancing around nervously. He did not know how the test was going to be. Even though he had practiced all night for the past week, he was sure he had missed some key dates and people in history. He wondered when exactly did Abraham Lincoln die when the teacher started handing out test packets."
You take some memories from your own life and translate it to a story. What did you feel like when you where nervous for a test? What did you think when you where nervous for a test? Did you chew your fingernails? Did you think you were going to fail? This is how you show.
The following dialogue occurs between two co-workers.
Co-worker A: Hello! Good Morning
Co-worker B: Good morning! How are you doing today?
Co-worker A: I'm doing... okay.
Co-worker B: Okay? you sound a bit off... is there something bothering you?
Co-worker A: just a bit stressed, for some reason my boss seems to always nitpick at my work, nothing ever works my way and now im afraid of losing my job because of all this stress I'm unable to concentrate.
Co-worker B: I'm sorry to hear that! Is there anything he continously points out about how you could improve your work?
Co-worker A: Yeah, it seems like I keep missing information he had provided to me in the past, the thing is that every time he talks to me my brain just blocks and after our meeting is done I cant remember anything he said!
Co-worker B: Oh! that sounds like a concentration issue or possibly an anxiety attack! Maybe your brain's way of coping with anxiety is to shut down... Have you tried taking notes of his oral observations?
Co-worker A: You're right that must be it! I'll try and do it next time, thank you SO much for your help, I just needed to vent a little, I really appreciate it!
In this simple dialogue we can observe how a thoughtful question can really make a difference for someone. It has been proven estatistically than 78% of suicides could have been prevented if the problem the person was facing would have been acknowledge by an external person that was not directly involve with the situation, according to 2017 NBCI reports.
The high road. People today are much more sensitive than in the previous years and are likely to take every little thing personally, resulting in arguments, loss of quality relationships and very hurt feelings. No one knows how to take criticism anymore.
Answer:
Closing
Explanation:
The salutation is to greet the person you are addressing, it goes before the introduction. The introduction is a brief summary of the letter itself and the body is the letter itself.
B.<span>The seminar was not interesting nor useful. is the correct answer
if you thank me it means alot</span>
