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1 01:59:04 Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to an argumentative editorial. Which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone? (1) Year-round schooling would help student achievement. (2) Not so much information would have to be crammed into nine months. (3) Furthermore, the elimination of long breaks, particularly summer break, would significantly reduce "learning loss" and the additional time wasted at the beginning of each academic year to reteach previously learned material. (4) It is clear that year-round schooling helps students learn and retain more. (5) The United States is not the only country to experiment with a year-round school schedule. (6) Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and see that students in these schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than students who attend schools with O Although many still claim that evidence about year- round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, studies consistently reveal that year- round students score hiflher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars. O Although many still claim that evidence about year- round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, this theory is wrong because students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars. Although many still claim that evidence about year- round school and its link to higher achievement is Save and Exit Net Subunit Mark this and return​

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Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, I would advise those people to look at the bigger picture and see that the scores of the students in these schools are consistently higher than that of those who attend schools with O (?).