Not sure....sorry maybe some else can help k
Actions can hold people accountable on how they produce their feelings. If someone were to “madly” yell at someone that they are in a argument with. They can end up saying harsh things or doing harsh things. That can hold them accountable. Again how I said “actions, how they produce their feelings”. Is showing that depending on how the person feels it can be associated with their actions!
B he starts off as a child in India, gets on the Japanese freighter to move the zoo, then when the ship gets caught in a storm he escapes on the lifeboat
The balloon rocketed into the sky. Though we were frightened, everything ended up being fine.
- The word "quickly" can be removed because speed is implied with the word "rocketed"
- The phrase "into the really cold air" can be removed because it is irrelevant to what's happening. It can be replaced by "into the sky"
- Now "up" can be removed because "into the sky" implies that the balloon went upwards.
- Either the word "scared" or "frightened" can be removed because they're synonyms (I chose to remove "scared")
- "Because it was moving really fast" can be removed because the use of the word "rocketed" beforehand already implies that the balloon was moving fast.
- Lastly , I just reworded and conjoined some of the sentences to make them read more clearly though this isn't necessary. (I changed the third sentence from "However, it was all good in the end," to "everything ended up being fine." I also combined the second and third sentences, adding "though" in front of the second sentence to make it a dependent clause)
