If it does not follow the model and is unstructured it could be confusing to the reader and look disorganized, discouraging the reader from finishing it. Hope this helps!
I would like to visit another country. There are many out there and I want to see as many as possible. One of my favorite countries i would like to visit is Spain. I have heard the environment is lovely and there are lots of nice people. I could see so many new things. I would be able to eat so many good foods. A trip to Spain would be very nice. France is also another lovely country. “There seems to be love in the air” as some would say. I heard they have some of the best bread and also many cool sights. All countries have something nice about them. There is food, sights, and many cultures. Every country you visit is diverse. you will be able to do things you’ve never done before. You will experience multiple things that can make you feel many emotions. That is why i would love to visit another country.
