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<em>Showing not telling.</em>
Explanation: [I'm 13 btw]
As a young writer, I've experienced difficulty with this ''show not tell'' thing, I'm still experiencing difficulty with it till this day. But now it's a lot more easier to describe the five senses (what the characters smell, hear, or what the characters see), how a particular place looks like, or how the characters feel throughout each scene.
Showing instead of telling can help the readers reflect what the characters are feeling. Whether they are sad or angry, happy or disappointed, showing is better than telling.
I'll give you an example:
<u><em>Telling:</em></u>
Jane is feeling hot.
<u><em>Showing:</em></u>
The atmosphere of the room was so thick, that sweat showered Jane's hair, her clothes were slightly damp, as she paced up and down her room.
It's better when there is more action described than dialogues. Yes, dialogues are important, especially when characters use them... But try not to overuse it. Otherwise there is a lot more telling than showing. Try to mirror the emotions to your readers. This way your readers won't fall in a long slumber.
<em>~May it help~</em>
Becuase she love who he was a s a person.
Well becuase even tho that one person has left, that means that they wont see each other agiain and that they still love each other, which is cute!
Set in the 24th century, Fahrenheit 451 tells the story of the protagonist, Guy Montag. At first, Montag takes pleasure in his profession as a fireman, burning illegally owned books and the homes of Fahrenheit 451 Summary. Set in the 24th century, Fahrenheit 451 tells the story of the protagonist, Guy Montag. At first, Montag takes pleasure in his profession as a fireman, burning illegally owned books and the homes of their owners.<span> their owners. </span>
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Explanation:
Answer: (Harry Potter right?) Professor Trelawney's subject was Divination. She teaches different methods of predicting the future, though some aren't always exact. Divination sometimes is not considered real magic, because the event never really happens; but keep in mind that it can be in a span of a day, to years and years. Her classroom, described as: <em>"At least twenty small, circular tables were crammed inside it, all surrounded by chintz armchairs and fat little pouffes. Everything was lit with dim, crimson light; the curtains at the windows were all closed, and the many lamps were draped with dark red scarves. It was stiflingly warm, and the fire which was burning under the crowded mantelpiece was giving off a heavy, sickly sort of perfume as it heated a large copper kettle. The shelves running around the circular walls were crammed with dusty-looking feathers, stubs of candles, many packs of tattered playing cards, countless silvery crystal balls and a huge array of teacups" </em>makes readers visualise how odd it really is, how bizarre the atmosphere feels. It is a dark and mysterious subject indeed, just looking at how the classroom is arranged. The location of the classroom is also really weird, because you have to pass through many things to get there. I personally don't think that the room itself is that unusual, but TRELAWNEY IS!
I hoped you get an idea of what I mean <3