<span>d. all of the above
Activists attend community meetings to do all of the abovementioned things.
They need to attend meetings to learn about issues and to keep themselves
updated of specific issues that concern them and their advocacy perhaps. The
also need to speak out on issues in so other members of the community may know
on their stand on the specific community issues. They have to let the other people
know on their opinions and how they feel about the issues that are being
discussed in the community.</span>
When i am stuck on wording i usually go to a thesaurus. it helps a lot! just make sure switch the right words and that the voice of your writing carries on nicely.<span />
Formal is like writing to professors. like this, The other day I was with a couple of friends at a cinema. After watching the film the Manager came towards us.... ect ect
The best answer for this question would be:
<span>The paragraph is choppy and in need of transitions.
It lacks the transitions needed in the passage. It doesn't flow right, and the topic jumps from one another making it a confusing passage to read. </span>
<span>punishments must be fair, cannot be cruel, and that fines that are extraordinarily large cannot be set. </span>
