123, 1, 123, 12
12 4, 123, 1 34
1, 12, 1, 12, 12, 12
1 3, 12 , 123, 123
1 3 , 123 , 1 , 1 4
let me know if I wrote it confusingly
Good job it’s really nice
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um no choices there but i would say probably cleaning a bathroom or cleaning throwup up
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is there a particular story or message youre trying to convey? here's just something off the top of my head picking up from after "sirens-":
<em>Stop trying to keep control,</em>
<em>Stop trying to keep control,My mind might feed on the guilt,</em>
<em>Stop trying to keep control,My mind might feed on the guilt,I'm going silent for a while,</em>
<em>Stop trying to keep control,My mind might feed on the guilt,I'm going silent for a while,So I'll let the roses wilt</em>,
sorry, I'm not amazing with lyrics lol
also maybe number the verses and make a chorus so it flows easier, most songs have a chorus that has a "catchy" melody and repeats a few times throughout the song, sometimes with little changes in lyrics.
it's not necessary (some songs don't have it) but just a suggestion :)
