Answer:
No because you write your claim first and then you go write down your facts to back up that claim
Explanation:
Tbh that is already good but you could also go with: We would love to feature you in this year’s yearbook. If you’re interested, you have to contact the student, and student named student in charge of the goal page. Please email students as soon as you can to see how you can get involved. Thank you for your cooperation.
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