They try to appeal the emocional of side you.
Answer:
immediacy
Explanation:
This excerpt is an example of immediacy because the writer describes the scene so vividly and it seems so real that the reader feels involved with it.
This excerpt is not a commentary because there are no opinions expressed or explanations offered.
None of the verbs is in the future tense.
There are no similes in the excerpt.
The mistakes with the sentence is that there should be a semi colon after the word week and there should be the word should after “I think I”
here is the sentence correctly
I’m exhausted after so much work this week; I think I should stay home and go to bed early.
So, it's interesting for the readers and it can cause the main conflict in the story. Good luck