Anthony is taking Denise for a ride in his new car. He moves fast down the highway. Suddenly Denise says, “Look out!” A truck moves into their lane, right in front of them. Anthony puts his foot on the brake-hard. The car goes first to the right, then to the left. “Don’t use the brake!” Denise says. Anthony takes his foot off the brake and gets control of the car. “We’re safe,” Anthony goes to Denise.

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Anthony is taking Denise out for a ride in his new car. He drives fast down the highway. Suddenly Denise screams, “Look out!” A truck shifts into their lane, right in front of them. Anthony slams his foot on the brake; hard. The car swerves first to the right, then to the left. “Don’t use the brake!” Denise shouts. Anthony takes his foot off the brake and regains control of the car. “We’re safe,” Anthony says to Denise

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3 years ago

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Identify each sentence as having an inappropriate shift in either person or number.

vekshin1

1. Inappropriate shift: It should be I can hear the waves vs you can hear.
2. Inappropriate shift: It should be either dried the clothes in the sun or dried them. It is plural and not singular use.
3. Inappropriate shift: It should be they had to take the long road... Again it is referencing plural and not singular
4. Inappropriate shift: It should be and gave them water to drink.
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3 years ago

Which is an example of textual evidence that supports this thesis?

Amanda [17]

Textual evidence means that the writer uses either direct quotations or paraphrased material from a source in order to support an argument or illustrate a point

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3 years ago

In the Emmett till book getting away with murder, are there web links at the end?

Elanso [62]

NO there is not web links at the end

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4 years ago