In the revising stage you should edit and reread the memo to make sure that thats what you wanna say
A subordinate idea in the sentence is the part of the sentence that does not convey a complete idea or thought and needs the main sentence to complete its message. The subordinate idea in the given sentence above is "After we found the classroom". This is introduced by the subordinating conjunction "after".
Answer:
a. perseverance
e. confidence
Explanation:
The above two qualities are what the speaker most clearly display as a result of the experiences he describes in lines 1-14 of "Who Understands Me but Me".
From the speaker's speech, we can deduce that the speaker portrays perseverance and confidence. One will discover that his speech reveals that he was persevering despite the harsh condition he was subjected to.
He said that they turn water off, so he lived without water. He also said that they took his heart and rip it open, so he lived without heart and so on.
This shows that despite what they did to him, he persevered and had confidence.
Rainsford needs control of his emotions to overcome his largest conflict, General Zaroff. At first, when he finds out he is going to be hunted, his instinct is to run in a panic, but he stops to look around and get a handle on the situation. Then, when Zaroff finds him hiding in a tree, Rainsford panics again, knowing Zaroff is playing with him. Once more, he controls his emotions and focuses on forming a plan. Even when the general is hot on his heels with a pack of dogs, Rainsford keeps his calm. Clearly, his self-control helps him win the game.
Which revision would help expand the ideas in this passage?
adding a clear description of Rainsford’s overall conflict
adding details about how Rainsford panicked during each conflict
adding an explanation of how Rainsford kept his calm while being chased by dogs
Answer:
adding an explanation of how Rainsford kept his calm while being chased by dogs
Explanation:
The revision that would help expand the ideas in this passage would be adding an explanation of how Rainsford kept his calm while being chased by dogs.
Note that what we are asked is the revision that would help EXPAND the ideas in the passage which can be done by adding more details about his experience of keeping his calm when chased by the dogs.
Answer:
tbh I watched this movie but never knew what happened to the father
Explanation:
he could've left to get milk and never came back
