22. Ryo had not seen her husband for 6 years since he was a prisoner of war in Siberia. Ryo sold tea to support her family and to survive. She was in Tokyo to be with a man, Tsuruishi, but he was killed in an accident. Ryo felt it was the right choice.
23. (This question has the same question with the end part of the previous number.) Ryo sold tea to support her family and to survive. She was in Tokyo to be with a man, Tsuruishi, but he was killed in an accident. Ryo felt it was the right choice.
24. The tailor's wife is the villain because she attempts to make them look bad and blames them for something they didn't do.
25. The professor got revenge by poisoning the food around the area. This affected not only the officers who unfairly prosecuted him. but innocent children. The real saboteurs were the police. If the police had not falsely accused Mr. Chiu, they would not have spread hepatitis to their city, disrupting the public. A few things he could have done was report the officers and start a protest.
Answer: 5/10 | I really liked your story! I think you should write more about how the sisters find the spellbook and where the evil jester goes when she is banished. You should also give all the characters formal names. You need to have more of a plot. Instead of saying "Then gradully the sisters secretly continue to send messages to each other and end up finding the location of the spellbook." You could say " When (Name) was banished, (Name2) sent her a message. 'I'm ready to find the spellbook', the message read." You need to add more dialogue. You should also check your spelling as I noticed several mistakes. You should add events leading up to the death of the king and queen. You could also give some information about the backstory of how the General's daughters are asked to come to the castle. I liked your story but overall you need
- Dialogue
- Formal names
-Plot, rising action, falling action
- Backstory
-Setting
-Spellcheck
Explanation:
The play Romeo and Juliet opens with a fight scene between the servants of the Montagues and Capulets. The purpose of this scene is to demonstrate how deep the hatred goes between the families. It's not just blood relatives fighting but any member of the household and its staff. Even the governing body of Verona, Prince Escalus, has trouble controlling the feud. By starting with their "new mutiny" that fuels the "ancient grudge", it develops the obstacle that Romeo and Juliet must overcome if they want to be together.
Optimism can still be present in case something goes wrong with the new world and we have another problem or there are people who just aren't optimistic.
