Can someone proofread my body paragraph and make sure I don't have any mistakes. It's about Football being too dangerous for sch
ool. According to Source 1 football is one of the most popular sports in the United States, but it’s also the leading cause of sports-related injuries. Football will always be one of the most popular games in the United States even though it’s considered one of the most dangerous sports yet they still allow it in schools all over the country. If it was too dangerous for schools the government would have banned it from schools all over the country.
You have minor errors, in the explanation I will put the updated version.
Explanation:
According to, "Source 1" it states that, "Football is one of the most popular sports in the United States, but it’s also the leading cause of sports-related injuries. Football will always be one of the most popular games in the United States even though it’s considered one of the most dangerous sports yet they still allow it in schools all over the country. If it was too dangerous for schools the government would have banned it from schools all over the country." These lines state that football is "dangerous" because of the activities people do, and the injuries they get from football. Yes, football is dangerous because of the injuries it causes but it is a common sport kids play, which means it is not that dangerous because, if the government knew football was that dangerous they would ban football from schools.
