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I have a small paper to write on the "What is the mystery of Nazca Lines?" and I was wondering if what I have wrote is enough, I'm open for anymore ideas for my paper.
After doing some research on the Nazca Lines I have found that they are these enormous geoglyphs that are etched into a roughly 200-square-mile stretch in the desert, they were created by the created somewhere between the 4th century B.C. and the 10th century A.D. by a group called the pre-Inca. These Lines are located in the deserts in Peru, between the Inca Valley and the Nazca Valley, and the Lines were discovered in 1927. There are some people that don’t believe that the Nazca Lines are real, but according to a Japanese Archaeological team, they have reports that state that they have correctly identified some of the glyphs, that some of them are non-native birds. The Nazca Lines have the nickname “Eighth Wonder of the World”, and they are some back stories about that name. Many people think that the lines were made by aliens or some other non-human because there is also a biomorph called “the astronaut”, which is a human figure with a bulbous head in a space suit. There have been reasons and other things that many people think the lines just showed up, but then there are other people who are saying it has to do with the sun and moon rise on important holidays, so it's like a big calendar. They think that the geoglyphs were to represent earthly constellations like the ones in the sky at night. But however, in more recent years, people and scientists are beginning to doubt the meaning that people have had for the lines and that they aren’t tied to celestial happenings.

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I think it's good! But when writing you need to make a hook something that will grab the readers attention so the only thing I would change would be the hook. But this is just me,I hope you make a good grade. Best of luck!

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